Journal #10

In our final week of the semester we had to finish up on all our major assignments and submit our first draft of our engineering proposal and have it reviewed by our peers. I received some constructive criticism from one of my classmates who pointed out something quite important that was lacking in my essay. It lead me to go back to my draft and include some missing parts to write a complete proposal. After correcting I had to expand it to fulfill the page requirement of this writing, which turned out to be quite easy for the most part. Finished my essay, submitted it, and then started working on my portfolio which has probably been the hardest assignment so far. Nonetheless, it’s turning to pretty decent and I can wait to be done with it to see how the end result will look.